Anuj, you are increasingly showing your personal design style with every project; Arbor is no exception. Clean, simple, minimalist design but with strong character, precise form and intelligent though process; Arbor is a product I can genuinely see becoming a successful product.
Your presentation was a highlight for me also. You were able to say everything you had to in a clear, concise and casual manner and did not run over-time. I also enjoyed how you justified your material choice and cutting method as well as justify the 'need' for a decent table center piece and coaster storage.
I am unsure about the name for the gift product, does it translate to something?
Also your 'in situ' poster may have been executed with more clarity. All in all a great result in the short time frame we had for this brief, well done.
Alan Jackson
Alan, Your product presented today was well researched, we;; thought out well executed. The number of ways in which you product reached the brief requirements was outstanding. The two things I enjoyed most about your design solution were the material used (recycled flooring) and the form. It was great to see you succeed in using this reclaimed material and the form of the birdhouse sits in surrounding environment and mimics nature is some aspects.
Area you my have improved for this project could perhaps be you presentation content i.e. explaining the most important aspects to avoid going over time, and also your communication of the final design solution; although the photographs in use are great communicators of how the products functions in it's environment, a hero shot of the product on it's own may have been a powerful tool as well.
Great result Alan
Area you my have improved for this project could perhaps be you presentation content i.e. explaining the most important aspects to avoid going over time, and also your communication of the final design solution; although the photographs in use are great communicators of how the products functions in it's environment, a hero shot of the product on it's own may have been a powerful tool as well.
Great result Alan
Your exploration is very thorough and it is good to see that you were selective in your form and colour choice and justified why you designed it that way. The use of cardboard in the product was also very impressive and meets the brief requirements on many levels. Great work Tila.
Dora Ferenczi
Dora, Great presentation and great design solution. Your model was outstanding and your communication posters were among the best I saw. I really love this kind of intelligent, problem solving, practical and useful design that you displayed today. being a rental tenant myself, I am aware of the last of suitable storage methods that don't destroy parts of your apartment walls.material choice was extremely beautiful and practical; the use of seat belts was very clever and I agree with you in keeping that contrast with char burnt edges for the timber. Please update your blog so we can see this beautiful product again! Great work.
Constance Docos
Constance, awesome design solution and gift idea. This outcome achieves on so many levels, it's aesthetically appealing, it serves a true function, is made of renewable long lasting material and most importantly gives the receiver options as to how they use the product. Because your products allows receivers to create they're own orientation for their photo display as well as add or subtract the amount of frames, it gives users a sense of emotional connection to the product, and makes them feel like they're designing the display. this subtle feature is what really makes your product stand out over it's competitors. You produced a nice, clean model, appropriate hero shots and effective communication poster. There is an issue of how multiple cork frames would be mounted on the wall, and the fact that string and hooks are involved may deter some potential buyers. Never-the-less a really nice outcome and solution to the brief.
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