Feedback Form-Studio Week 4

Name	Peter Calaitzopoulos (z3331400)
Date	27/03/13
Feedback from Peer 1 Alexander Chittenden	-page 3 has is too busy, eliminate a graph +diagram on page  4 is effective and informative
Feedback from Peer 2 Alexander Morris	+milk bottle and obese dot points are graphically interesting -the cross dot points are too large and off theme, try and keep it to 1 or 2 styles only (i.e. just obese dot point)
Feedback from Tutor Simon R.	+- the image on page 2 is great, however try to make the 1962 boy shorter and smaller than the 2012 boy, for emphasis -reverse the red and black on page 2; it’s too hard to read.
Lesson learnt from listening to other Tutors	-make the images on page 3 either all photographs or all cartoons, keep it consistent. Also don’t put a 1990’s TV and a skinny inactive boy -too much text and info on page 5, find out what you really want to say, summarise and communicate.

The Key feedback I received from tutors and peers from the week 4 Studio were:

-Title Page, with subtle name/student number
-Be wary of the path that the eye takes across the page
-Social Issue, have i) Key Statistic ii) intro/analysis iii) No logos, use proper referencing
-Existing Products, highlight the fact that they do not address the social issue
-Design Solution, SELL IT!
-Try and use the negative space effectively to ensure pages do not look busy
-Include inspirations, progression to find concept, TELL STORY
-Set themes, Colours, Branding, composition style